Great new article. Watch your capitalization of proper nouns, and re-check your grammar.
Perhaps add a section on existing exhibits (permanent exhibits) as well as possible links to particular works of art. Also, some past exhibits that have visited would be nice.
What else goes on at the museum-- other events, etc.?
What sort of programs does the museum offer? I know they children's programs occasionally.
For some reason when I click on your references it takes me to Utah museum page with internet gibberish on it. Also what others have said about the stationary exhibits.
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The first thing I noticed was the references don't have titles, so you might want to add titles to all of the references.
A bigger section on the current collection would also be nice.
Great new article. Watch your capitalization of proper nouns, and re-check your grammar.
Perhaps add a section on existing exhibits (permanent exhibits) as well as possible links to particular works of art. Also, some past exhibits that have visited would be nice.
What else goes on at the museum-- other events, etc.?
What sort of programs does the museum offer? I know they children's programs occasionally.
On the whole, informative and organized.
Try to put in other sources and tie other related wiki articles to yours.
For some reason when I click on your references it takes me to Utah museum page with internet gibberish on it. Also what others have said about the stationary exhibits.
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