Wednesday, April 23, 2008

First Draft Fiction

My fiction piece is a fake myspace page on my dog.

2 comments:

elbrando said...

Maybe you could include a video of rufus? Expand more on his adventures add a story about one time chasing a squirrel or somthing. Possibly add a picture slide show. Character is a bit dumb...Rufus isn't the smartest dog. But Rufus is funny I'll give you that. Funny lookin

WonderBunny said...

I liked the part about the dogs being in love and them Rufus found her cheating.

I think if he is looking for love then maybe adjust what he is looking for. He is looking first for another dog, not someone to scratch his belly. I don't know..someone to sniff every single plant and tree with.

I think adding a few blogs post might be funny. Maybe about how much Rufus loves a famous dog in the movies (Lassie or Snoopy). Or maybe start some blog posts and then get someone else to comment about oh in love they are with Rufus in the comments section. Or do a blog post about how in love Rufus is already because he has found someone. Or his adventures chasing squirrels today.